Valentine Day is not just a day for me. This is not just a day when I give a chocolate to my boyfriend. It is because this is the day when he asked me to be his girlfriend. So, for me valentine is a meaningful day. Thus, I want to spend this upcoming event with all my might to make him grateful to have me as his girlfriend.

I want to make the most delicious chocolate cake for him. I want it to be a homemade cake. So, I will make it myself. But, I have no enough cooking appliances to make the cake in the kitchen. I have neither microwave nor oven. And, right now I have no enough money to buy any cooking appliances. I really want to bake the cake myself and I think I will figure out a way to earn more money to buy the oven. Well, it seems cash advance is my solution since I am truly in need of money quickly. I should apply for this loan online I guess because I don’t want anybody to find out about this but my lender only.

There is a website which offers great deal of loan without too much documentation and credit report notice. PayDayOne.com seems interesting to me. So, I will submit my application immediately.



by Brenda Hill

As writers, we dream of awed people asking about our books. And in our dreams, we dazzle them with a fascinating narrative that’ll keep them spellbound and eager to dash out to buy our books.

I had that dream too. Then I woke to a humiliating experience because I was unprepared. I didn’t have a tagline.

A tagline can be defined as:

A summary
A premise
A one-line slogan

While condensing a novel to, say, three dynamic paragraphs for a query or a back-cover blurb is torturous enough, cutting it even further into a catchy one- or two-liner tagline is nightmare material. Not only does it have to brief, but it must hint of the theme, tone, characters, problem, and you must make it interesting and powerful enough to entice readers into buying your book.

Simple, isn’t it?

Sure. As another writer said, “It’s like opening a vein.”

But it’s something, no matter how painstaking, you should do.

My determination to write a tagline was the result of a simple question:

“What is your book about?”

My first novel, Ten Times Guilty, had just been released, and I was admiring it over lunch at my local Denny’s, almost hugging it to me in glee, flying so high I felt sure I could touch the stars. When a woman on her way to the cashier saw my book and stopped to ask THE question, I hadn’t prepared something short and catchy, so I rambled on and on, trying to remember my three-paragraph blurb. But the more I talked, the less I remembered, so I started rambling. When I noticed her eyes starting to glaze, I babbled on, trying to ‘fix’ what I’d said by explaining even more.

Finally, she mumbled something and ran out the restaurant. I think, in her haste to escape me, she sailed right past the cashier. Staring after her, I felt so humiliated that I gathered my things and left as well. I waited a few moments at the door, though; I didn’t want that poor woman to think I was chasing after her.

Oh, talk about nightmarish times, but after that, I was determined to research taglines and learn how to write them. I wanted something I could spout when asked THE question, something that would cause them open their mouths in awe and demand, “Where can I get a copy? I MUST read your book.”

When I got online, I found some great taglines that I liked, so I copied them, and, using them as examples, I practiced writing my own. It took page after page after page of revisions, of writing the high points of my novel and cutting, condensing, and smoothing before I was satisfied. I never did reach the perfection of a one-liner, but I was happy with the final two sentences:

Ten Times Guilty…

…about a single mother’s struggle for worth after a vicious attack. It’s about a police sergeant seeking redemption for a crime he didn’t realize he had committed—until the victim died.

I’m still working on one for my new novel, Beyond the Quiet, due to be released in February 2009:

Lisa Montgomery thought her husband’s death was the worst that could happen—until she discovers his secret post office box.

Another attempt:

…it’s about a woman who struggles through grief, loss, betrayal, and rage, learning to cherish each moment and follow her long-buried dreams. It’s the story of how a quiet, passionless widow becomes spirited enough to climb onto her lover’s shoulders for a piggyback ride in the nude.

I’ll do more rewriting, but at least I have a starting point. Practice writing your own, so that you’ll look and sound like the professional you are when someone asks THE question.

Some examples I loved:

Wide Awake (1998)
Struggling to adjust to his beloved grandfather’s death, a boy seeks understanding of God, life and injustice.

When Secrets Kill (1997)
A man is suspected of killing his daughter’s birth mother, whose unexpected arrival shatters the family.

Notice how they’re short but punchy, and at the same time they’re very precise. And when writing your own, remember to include:

1) Who is the story about?
2) What do they want?
3) What is the problem or conflict?

Remember, as writers, we need to paint a picture with words.

Look at the following, two of the best taglines I’ve seen:

A minister’s wife confronts her long-buried past when her illegitimate daughter shows up after twenty years.

Can’t you just see the wife and want to know the story behind the tagline? Doesn’t that make you ask questions?

Why did she give up her daughter?
Is her husband a strict, non-conforming husband?
Does she live in a small-judgmental town?
And her daughter. How will her daughter feel?
Will she harshly judge her mother? Will she be warm to her mother or will she be resentful?

And this one:

Two brothers fight on opposite sides in the Civil War and come face to face on a battlefield.

Who doesn’t want to know what happens? That situation has everything for high drama, yet it has to be heartbreaking. A perfect tag.

So we all need to read them and study how they were done, and do the same with ours. And we can. After all, we’re writers.

© Brenda Hill